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Scarred By Your Power by ~hitchcockm00:iconhitchcockm00:



Scarred By Power

Running through fields,
Scarred by your power,
Skipping down pathways,
Lie down and cower.

Staring at blue skies,
Lit up with rage,
Searching horizons,
Trapped in this cage.

Creeping down corridors,
Walls falling down,
Hiding in shelters,
No-one's around.

Evoryone's guilty,
No-one breaks free,
Everyone suffers,
But no-one can see.
©2005-2009 ~hitchcockm00
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Author's Comments

This is a poem loosly based around the war in Chechnia (dunno if I spelt it right). But it isn't completely about that.
It's just about how citizens suffer because a stronger country wants to bomb a weaker one.

It's crap I know, that's why it's so short.

p.s the last line is based on Chechnia because there is hardly any news coverage about the continuing suffering in Chechnia so no-one in the world sees what's going on.

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:iconbubblefuck:
i dont think it's that bad actually :) i like it, well done =D
:iconhitchcockm00:
okey dokey, thankyou very much
:iconfarfrmperfect:
I think you did quite well on this.
:icontinsel-wig:
Incredible.. <3

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:iconmicxx:
hm i barely know anything about history. so i don't know how to comment so much on this poem. but i'm sure in situations like this people would want to hide, run away and cry, which you captured brillaintly in this poem. um i do like this poems, i like the short and sharp lines but its sounds like it could be about most wars or similar events, maybe you could personalise it more towards Chechnia but i dunno, its great how it is.

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:iconhitchcockm00:
well it is supposed to be about most wars and stuff not just Chechnia, Chechnia just inspired it.

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